Beautiful Poem by Mel Emelda

Beautiful

Rating: 4.9


I pray for God for flower
but He gave me a cactus full of thorns
I pray for butterfly
but He gave me a caterpillar
I feel sad and disappointed
but then
the cactus yield flowers and
the caterpillar became a beautiful butterfly

That is God way
beautiful at the time

God will not give us what we hope
but He gave us what we need

Sometimes we feel sad,
disappointed and being hurt but far from that
He makes the best for our life
sumptuous and
Beautiful! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
flariza bazu 26 June 2009

beatiful is beautiful is jus a matter of percepcion

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Hosni Rizk 24 June 2009

a very good begin.Keep on writting

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Dana Amer 24 June 2009

Wow! such an ammazing poem, nicely written too, keep the good work =)

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Very beautiful Etrodinarily written I love the exqusite use of sights You are A very lovely poet Keep going for it lol.........100000++++

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Ejaz Khan 24 June 2009

Beautifuly expressed, I wish you all the best!

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Ramesh Rai 16 April 2015

Nicely penned. Keep writing

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Charity Nduhiu 15 December 2014

Gods ways are not our ways. Nice poem

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Ugly turned into beauty. Nicely woven. But the flip side ‘ugly-beauty’ expecting form you next time. And ten dr. sakti

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 10 July 2009

Interesting poem! God knows what we deserve.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 July 2009

God will not give us what we hope but He gave us what we need......................yet it is most beautiful as u blaze the glory of God, yes God bestow on what we really deserve but not what we desire, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Mel Emelda

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