Hate is passion
it is the word many fear to hear
it wraps and binds your soul
it'll make you go crazy
you'll strike at nothing
while you trust no one
As it eat at your heart
but hate is beautiful
not quit like the flowers
but in its own twisted way
the pain, the emotion
that surrounds your soul
the things it'll make you do
the mountains you will clime
the adrenaline rushes you'll enjoy
to learn to live with hate to
not allow it to take over
least you think you can control it
but don't make me laugh
it captures your soul
it tortures your mind
makes you see in way
you thought not possible
you act different
and when you cry
no one sees when
you scream nobody
comes that's how it grows
getting ready to strike others
you'll try to stop but give it up
and embrace the power to feel nothing
numb your mind and soul
push the guilt away and take
whats rightfully yours
Hate is twisted
Hate is passion
Hate is beautiful
Nice one. It's a game which bounces back love within. Thank you Brittney!
it eat your heart least you think you act different etc. probably works (along with the eccentric spelling in other of the poems) if you are a dialect speaker, but not otherwise. The contradictions also remain and are unresolved. This poetry is like a local wine in France of the sort that tastes well in its own district but does not bottle and travel. Full of homely insight it needs to be read sympathetically.
Beautifully penned. In fact, hate lies at the peak of love. CP
Everything is beautiful, yor poems proves it....I am amazed at the quality of your writing............keep writing....I loved the last three lines the most........
Hate is well expressed, the thing about hate is that it has a way of twisting you to indulge more and more to its poisonous nature. Beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
but don't make laugh it captures your soul it tortures your mind makes you see in way you thought not possible you act different its a good poem written sweet way.. hate is expressed well but I say hate should be hate..because the only friendly smile can let every one in peace as i say in my say ((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq))) any way your poem is good and I liked the way you done..10/10