Elena Toledo

Beautiful Soul

The wilderness is her getaway; out of
civilization, away from pollutes and
stress, lives free like a soul without sin,
like butterflies and fairies; she dresses

soft, with color and textures of silk and
pastel. She can be spotted from a distance,
her moves like flying fairies captures the
eye. When she needs rest; she strips down

to pure nudeness, she lays on the fresh grass;
becoming the essences of a frame. She falls
asleep like a Goddess princes, she becomes
meaningful to every creatures sight. The young

pigeons come and gather petals and cover her
nakedness beauty. She walks away leaving
her unforgotten image in the eyes of one.

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 15, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 28, 2012

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This poem was inspire by the beauty and freshness of youth.

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  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (6/27/2014 8:51:00 AM)

    Imaginative and dreaming like poem and it is nice.

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  • Colleen Courtney (6/27/2014 7:25:00 AM)

    Such an incredibly beautiful poem! Whimsical and enchanting. Dreamy and mystical. Wonderfully written! Have added to my list of favorites!

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (6/27/2014 3:02:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, beautiful imagery.Well done.

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  • Vassilis Comporozos (6/27/2014 12:47:00 AM)

    She walks away leaving
    her unforgotten image in the eyes of one...

    What can one say about this piece of writing? poetic, dreamy, silky, loneliness in the realm of beauty

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (6/27/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    nakedness beauty, good write, thanks.

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  • Leslie Philibert (6/27/2013 3:26:00 AM)

    Great write, a poem of quality.

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  • Elena ToledoElena Toledo (6/28/2012 10:13:00 PM)

    Thank you to all the ones that read my work.?

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  • Gabhriel LondeGabhriel Londe (6/28/2012 1:03:00 AM)

    Beautiflly created scene, but what's the story? I feel like I'm missing that. However, as I said, well written picture.

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  • Jasbir ChatterjeeJasbir Chatterjee (6/28/2012 12:07:00 AM)

    How well you put it, Elena! Loved it!

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  • Kaila GeorgeKaila George (6/27/2012 11:24:00 PM)

    Congratulations for the poem of the day, and I understand why too, its like your painting a picture with your pen, bravo...look forward to reading more of your poems.

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  • Shouvik RoyShouvik Roy (6/27/2012 1:16:00 PM)

    wonderfully written..soulful.. :)

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  • Besa DedeBesa Dede (6/27/2012 10:47:00 AM)

    Beautiful description! Alas, Humans have forgotten to hear and appreciate Nature...
    Regards,
    ~Besa

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  • Captain CurCaptain Cur (6/27/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    Raw, sweet, swift, intoxicating! All types of
    emotions here. Well done!

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  • Reshma Ramesh (2/9/2009 8:02:00 PM)

    beautiful.........................

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (9/17/2008 7:55:00 AM)

    Well, I'm a soul searcher and I think I've found my spot!

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  • Colin Jeffery (9/16/2008 2:32:00 PM)

    A truly stunning poem.

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (9/15/2008 1:07:00 PM)

    ammmmmazing a scenerio has been created...well done............10

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