Beauty, Beholder's Pleasure Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Beauty, Beholder's Pleasure

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If superficial, shallow and skin deep,
Beauty, as beauty buffs might well say, lies
But in a beholder's regarding eyes,
But can it from a shallow surface leap?
It's known to glow and gleam from deep within,
Emanating from holder's feeling heart,
And a thing seldom is of visual art,
A child of heart, beauty's more felt than seen.

Fine, fine but how many Helens you think
You give to me, be they from head or heart?
Well as a beholder let me not blink,
‘With Helens' filled your every square-inch part,
‘Yet, Helens seldom be your sole measure,
‘You're a beholder's heart-full of pleasure'.
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Millihelens1: As beauty is often graded— 1000 of them making one Helen, the unit of Helen being fashioned after Helen of Troy believed to be the most stirring beauty ever to have walked on this globe. In the octave of this sonnet, a husband talks about what beauty is. In the sestet the lady wants to know what he thinks about her beauty, and there is a political answer.
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Sonnets | 04.02.08 |

Sunday, December 15, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: political,beauty,husband,sonnet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 September 2019

" What beauty is" ....has been well defined by you in this poem. The way of presentation is much interesting. Following lines inspire me.... ‘Yet, Helens seldom be your sole measure, ‘You're a beholder's heart-full of pleasure'. Thank you dear Pathak sir,10.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 September 2019

Beauty is no beauty until a beholder comes to appreciate. A poem is no poem till a reader reads and appreciates. Thank you dear KM for digging out this poem of 2008.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 July 2019

Let me not blink! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 September 2019

Thank you EKL, but I had missed this feedback before.

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