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Beauty In My Broken Places

Rating: 5.0
It is as ardent as a ruby
And nonpareil as a gold,
Decked with keloids like pearls
It is a pure treasure trove,
Of bloodstained esteem to behold.
It is as byzantine as an art,
Spilling notions of forgotten seasons,
Frescoing the final caged tumultuous echoes,
That had once ripped and rushed
From this heart within.
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Beauty In My Broken Places
Tuesday, January 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,love,self,self discovery,women
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COMMENTS
Siddartha Montik 04 July 2017
Liked this Poignant write. Deeper than Depth of pain 10+++!
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Nayanika Dey 04 July 2017
Thank you so very much!
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Siddartha Montik 04 July 2017
Liked this Poignant write. Deeper than Depth.10+++!
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 June 2017
ardent as a ruby nonpareil as a gold, nothing but the pains and pleasures blood clotted scar pinkened flesh of mine addicted by the beauty these are the points that i collected after carefully reading your poem. Thank you. You are full of ideas and imaginations. Thankyou
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Nayanika Dey 24 June 2017
Heartfelt thanks for such a kind review and words of encouragement. Thank You!
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Bri Edwards 04 May 2017
A Poet's Notes would be much appreciated. For me, your wording should be simpler. And don't depend on photo to tell the story. If one is to carry scars, it is at least fortunate that some can be easily covered, and most of the face is still 'very attractive'. On tablet now. Maybe i SHALL return when on PC. Bri :)
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Nayanika Dey 30 June 2017
Thank you so much, Sir!
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Nayanika Dey 30 June 2017
Thank you so much, Sir.
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Unnikrishnan E S 23 February 2017
Hi Nayanika, I came back for a re.. This very poignant write is genuinely a bloodstained esteem to behold. And Notions of forgotten seasons.. Tears and an undoused fire of anguish...
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Nayanika Dey 03 May 2017
Tons of thanks to you. Keep encouraging me and blessing me.
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Unnikrishnan E S 29 January 2017
Hi Nayanika, A profound poem, articulating an immensely relevant theme. And enriched with a most apt image. A stark Reminder to the entire humanity.100++ is too short before this artwork..
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Nayanika Dey 03 May 2017
Hello Sir, Immense thanks for your so kind and encouraging words of appraisal. Glad to come across you!
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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2017
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in heightened poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Nayanika.
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Nayanika Dey 26 January 2017
Immense thanks, dear writer.
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