Nature's Bride Poem by NAYANIKA DEY

Nature's Bride

Rating: 4.9


The porcelain empyreal
Blended itself
Like a bride
In the palette of
Amber blush.
It contoured its
Cheek bones of mounts
With liquid onyx,
With ruby mascara
It mascaraed its lashed rays
That curled down
On the waterline of its eyes,
And with the orange veil
It cloaked & hid its
Shy face covering and
Containing the sky.

Saturday, July 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,mountain,nature,sea,sky
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 01 September 2017

a wonderful descriptive poem of natural beauty at it's finest? ............well writtenND.

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Nayanika Dey 30 March 2018

tons and tons of thanks. I hope you would like my page facebook.com/authornayanikadey

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 September 2017

Such a nice poem of the day... congrats, Nayanika.... Rated 10+++++

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Nayanika Dey 30 March 2018

tons of thanks to you. I hope you would like my page facebook.com/authornayanikadey

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Bharati Nayak 01 September 2017

With ruby mascara It mascaraed it's lashed rays That curled down On the waterline of its eyes, And with the orange veil It cloaked & hid it's Shy face covering and Containing the sky. - - - - - - - - A fine poetic expression describing Nature in a bridal make-up.Shy face covering and containing the sky- -This line I like most.What a poetic imagination contained there ! !

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Nayanika Dey 30 March 2018

immense thanks for such wonderful words of appraisal. I hope you would like my page facebook.com/authornayanikadey for more poems.

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Lantz Pierre 01 September 2017

The bride is what? More nature? Or an ethereal porcelain doll in some fantastic natural light? Sometimes I'm so dense. I don't get it.

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A wonderful poetic portrait of a demure bride..beautifully written..

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Anita Aparajita Das 01 September 2017

On the waterline of its eyes, And with the orange veil It cloaked & hid it's Shy face covering and Containing the sky. Nice poem. Thanks poet. 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 September 2017

Shy face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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NAYANIKA DEY

NAYANIKA DEY

Durgapur, West Bengal, India
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