Hanan Muzafar

Bronze Star - 2,648 Points (14-08-1991 / Model Town Sopore (Kashmir))

Becalmed - Poem by Hanan Muzafar

Burdened wood to carry away,
breath heard, and sigh afraid,
Snow melted down on surface,
and mountain still in haze:
What died, and broke inside,
nothing can bring that back—
Tried to make a dent,
found and opened a door,
Fragile part of fragment,
where emotions reside,
and rational broke on sorrow:
Lonely I wander here,
and in rain I shall go—
Becalmed sail in wind,
passed through edges of space,
Thunder lost in storm,
with burns and wounds,
flowing on walls:
Calm and silent, when torn apart,
and leaves left behind.

Topic(s) of this poem: alone, despair, dreams, failure, fall, hopelessness, loss, love, sad, sorrow

Form: Lyric

Comments about Becalmed by Hanan Muzafar

  • Rajnish Manga (12/6/2018 11:17:00 PM)

    Reality of life underscored beautifully. Thanks & Congrats. (Report) Reply

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  • Jennifer Birchall (12/6/2018 10:09:00 PM)

    Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us, its full of emotion. Congratulations on poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Muzahidul Reza (12/6/2018 12:06:00 PM)

    an outstanding poem has been greatly shared, .......
    we are going to fight against feelingless stones, consequently, output is nothing but damaging,
    great poem, congrats and thanks for being poet and poem of bay, + 10
    I think you will like to read my poems,
    (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/6/2018 11:39:00 AM)

    Lost in storm!

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • (12/6/2018 10:51:00 AM)

    The poem raises great sentiment when you write,
    and in rain i shall go, I read and think its great meaning
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  • (12/6/2018 10:40:00 AM)

    and in rain I shall go—
    Becalmed sail in wind,
    touching poem you have good written, thanks many
    (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (12/6/2018 8:55:00 AM)

    So touchingly painful yet so heartwarming. If pain could be the balm for a wounded life this poem heals beautifully. Congratulations and thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Petals Azureblue (12/6/2018 4:49:00 AM)

    A painful poem of hurt. But this too shall pass Poet Hanan. Congrats for POD selection.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2018 3:38:00 AM)

    A poem of how sometimes it is hard to move on to better and more positive things? ........well written Hanan (Report) Reply

  • Adrian Flett (12/6/2018 3:24:00 AM)

    A sad and dark poem that lends no window of light or hope. (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (12/6/2018 2:30:00 AM)

    Oh! fire fire everywhere
    not a while living in fair
    leader comes and goes
    refugee gets destroyer
    .../// beautifully written
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2018 2:09:00 AM)

    Congratulations on your well crafted poem being poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (12/6/2018 12:33:00 AM)

    Hanan, such an inspiring poem of the day.
    Congrats for being selected....10++++++++++
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  • (11/6/2018 4:33:00 PM)

    We must fight everyday to be happy, yes we will have some sad days
    but we must fight for the good days.
    A great poem.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 6, 2018

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 6, 2018

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