Before Orgasm Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Before Orgasm

Rating: 4.9


Your midnight laughter
And dark red wine,
Your face of classical paintings
And your supple arms
Enlacing my heart
With a simple embrace
Make everything clear….

Life is lovely treachery
Like being tortured with feathers
Or postponing forever
The achingly tender moment
Before orgasm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 16 September 2006

Wonderful words Uriah, sensual, seductive and sad. loved it. Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 09 June 2006

such a warm feel Uriah....very seductive :)

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Duncan Wyllie 04 June 2006

The closeness of this, the feeling of satisfaction of the heart, so enjoyable for the loving hearts 10 Love Duncan X

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Amberlee Carter 30 May 2006

very intimate and sexy uriah...but overwhelmingly tender as well...I loved it...as I always do.. Always, Amberlee

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Elya Thorn 26 May 2006

Oh this is very very beautiful, Very well written! I am amazed.....How well it flowts... ~~Elya Thorn~~

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