Beginning Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Beginning

Rating: 5.0


Chorus of morning leaves
Paint trees deeper in happy green.
Sunrays ricochet
From your eyes to my lips.
Maybe we are dying
For heaven has stepped down between us.
Heart beat resonates
All over the sky
Carried by the wild wings of
White doves.

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,hope,love,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2015

From your eyes to my lips! With the muse of love and life. Beautiful! !

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Kelly Kurt 14 October 2015

Simply beautiful. Thanks, Sanjukta

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

Allover the sky love shines in ways. Wonderful drafting shared really...10

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2015

Outstanding poem, back with bang.....Beginning is amazing......... +++

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, A good imagery,

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