Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 613,580 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Behind Us - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Never before I found an opportunity
To watch closely the power of almighty
The sun was coming up with redishness
As always to bring with happiness and joy on face

I had not cared to watch rising sun
It was not taken seriously even as fun
Oh no, what is there to see in morning
“Life runs as usual” with rest in evening

Many of us may be thinking same
I do share the entire blame
We are not wholly indebted
To the natural objects when acted

It is our source of inspiration
Bond to be made with strong relation
That we are really not worth
If prefer ignorance till death

We draw enough of energy
Toil hard day time to get of worries
Wait for grand success
And bring shine on face

Let us be careful and obedient
To super divine power who has sent
All blessings for entire man kind
With message that they are behind us


Comments about Behind Us by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2013 10:25:00 PM)


    Hasmukh Mehta thanks nafisaa
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2013 9:46:00 PM)


    he poet details our under appreciation of divine natural occurrences that passes without any consideration.

    Mary Akinosi6 minutes ago
    My favorite part of this poem is its word choice and visual imagery that guide the reader through a delightful word party that instilled a new founded interest in the smaller things.
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    great work
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2013 9:45:00 PM)


    Nathaniel HoBs Jenkins24 minutes ago
    great work
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2013 9:11:00 PM)


    Never before I found an opportunity
    To watch closely the power of almighty
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 5, 2013


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