Being Alone Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Being Alone
I feel bad being alone
As time passes and counting is done
Days seem to be very long
I hate now listening to the songs
I feel inner thrust
I want to see him and it is must
It is just causing me break down
I am loosing grip of my own
I had enough of intoxication
That has proved ineffective excitation
I can not forget him for a second
When I was near I never felt or was so much fond
I know I will have to pull some more days
As he has gone away for us to nicely stay
Some one has to sacrifice for entire family
But in all we females suffer miserably
I know some of the burdens are too heavy
To share effectively and carry
It is great deal to keep everybody happy
Wife is solely responsible and must be ready
Men folks are generally suited
They stand firm and are truly cultivated
Children too take guidance from head of the family
It is really blessed world created by almighty
I like it Marsha ElliottLess than a minute ago Nicely said. Comment +1 Very nice poem
Why wife has to care and share and bear allllll the responsibility................?
Feelings well written Diana Robillard-Hoy3 minutes ago I believe English is your second language, or this is a translation. Translations never seem to get the English quite right. I guess I am also more femenist than I thought as well, because I had to fight that to review your poem. Your beliefs are not mine but I defend your right to believe as you wish.Well Done! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it is original coming from inner feeling. no translation as i am linguist plus english steno.. i have collection of about 45oo poem s
i like it but it wavers at the end Bod hisattvaLess than a minute ago as above some good parts but thread is lost towards end Comment +1 not bad
dzupaks velosoLess than a minute ago hold on. don't lose hope. Comment +1 Nice poem
oluwasegun anthonyLess than a minute ago I love it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Dhirendra Kumar PandaLess than a minute ago I like it, Best Wishes