Best Day Poem by Kassem Oude

Best Day

Rating: 3.0


On cliff wolf saw the goat
He shouted out of his throat
'Would ask you something dear
Which is the best day in year'

'When I don't your voice hear
Nor when your shape far appear
Leave me alone live in peace
I cannot endure your caprice.

Monday 9 June 2014

Monday, June 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alaa Elgadi 07 June 2015

Such a dramatic poem.. It is an enthralling verse... Well- preserved rhyme with a metaphysical dialogue between a murderer and a victim.... Well done Poet Kaseem Oude...

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 June 2014

Wow im impressed by yor wonderful rhymin skill. I also liked yor jinn poem so much. Pls coment my latest poem too.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 June 2014

good writing, thanks, I like it. please read my poems and comment.

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