Best Time Poem by Roselyn A.M.

Best Time

Rating: 5.0


Here I go again
Lying on bed, drifting away
Thinking if I could have a better sleep.
Raindrops pouring heavily on roof deck
Reminds me of your sweet caress.
“This is the best time…”
Still I can hear your whisper
Side by side, the warmth can be felt.
Bedtime isn’t always for sleep
We had our moments to speak
To resolve some problems and query
Cuddling up as we weave our reverie.

But that was long time ago
When we’re still young and on the go.
So much responsibilities keep us apart
Though, I always keep you in my mind
Your image drawn on my shut-eye
The sheet acts to warm my cold arms.

I have only one wish if we could reach
The retirement period, the peak of our age.
Could we still sleep together at night?
Hold my hand, squeeze me tight
‘Til your bony hand and mine get tired.
Patiently I can ignore your snore that’s too loud
Just to be with you ‘til the last breath of my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Beatiful love story. Beatifully written: just the real you. Keep writing from your golden heart. Laura

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Louis Rams 03 August 2010

this is a love story from the heart and you said it so beautifully from the start keep on writing and you will see that the words come out freely.

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Louis Rams 03 August 2010

a true love story that comes from the heart you have came in with a beautiful start. keep on writing and you will see that everything comes ever so freely.

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