Better Brothers And Sisters

Rating: 2.8

we were
brothers and sisters
even before we were born

these physiques
they are superb
instruments
a bonus for games
sensual, pleasure
triumph, losses
tears, laughters
we all throw away
the temporary masks
after our adventures
to be better brothers and sisters

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 27 May 2007

We are all bonded together as human beings regardless of race, color or culture. Very profound, John. Warm regards, Sazndra

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Michael Pacholski 13 May 2007

That's an extraordinary line break between 'superb' and 'instruments'. What I get out of it is that after you've experienced what you've experienced with brothers and sisters, you shake it all off and still bonded forever you remain. Well done. Michael.

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