Better We Choose Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Better We Choose

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Better we choose 
Tuesday,30th October 2018

Give more love
and believe
in its impact
this is reality or fact 

more you give
and less you forgive
serves no purpose
it is better we choose an option 

life is like a rainbow 
with one cruel touch, it may go 
vanish with its color
life is not meant to suffer

remember all those here
who were very dear
and showered the love and affection
out of their possession 

we don't know
how to tackle and where to go 
but yes, we can definitely show 
and with maturity grow 

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Better We Choose
Tuesday, October 30, 2018
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2018

welcome Lisa Kelderhouse 7 mutual friends 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 October 2018

impressive stanza- more you give and less you forgive serves no purpose it is better we choose an option /// written beautifully

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2018

we don't know how to tackle and where to go  but yes, we can definitely show  and with maturity grow  Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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