Lillian Susan Thomas


Between Us - Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

The distance between you and me
As we swim in the lake
Is only our breath.
The distance between you and the sun
Is the whole sky.
The distance between me and the setting sun
Is only my outstretched arms.
See! I touch fingers of gold,
And you braid it into my blazing hair
As you comb your fingers through it.
The distance between the setting sun and us
Is only our skin.


Comments about Between Us by Lillian Susan Thomas

  • Romeo Della Valle (7/23/2011 11:38:00 PM)


    Wow! Lillian! What a romantic and heart touching poem that really left me speechless! I really love it! Amazingly it moved me! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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  • (12/13/2010 4:17:00 PM)


    Very touching poem. I love all amourous poems! .

    I rejoice that I found your corner of poems.

    Edmund
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  • (1/6/2010 9:39:00 AM)


    Finest imageries and enjoyed to the lees…
    Thanks for sharing…
    Ten++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, July 25, 2011


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