Monday, January 13, 2014

Beyond A Tracing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beyond a tracing how can you be there
If you are somewhere there around us?
I find not even an apparition assuring me
Of your tamed or wild presence in any shade
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Marvin Brato 25 January 2014

Quite intriguing expressions about suspense and mystery....worth the read!

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Hazel Durham 16 January 2014

So original, with lines of such intensity and mystery of a lifetime of confusion about the existence of him so beautifully blended into a suspenseful, intriguing puzzle! Superb write! !

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Dinesan Madathil 15 January 2014

I meant someone else absolutely missing Kavya... Chandrupatla sir, you said and unsaid it, Shahziaji, He is beyond a tracing, And Valsa madam, let them both emerge soon.

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Kavya . 15 January 2014

a hidden treasure! the poem carries a suspense throughout! but Sir may I know whom is this pointed to in particular...Is it the Magic Box guy that Valsa Mam has rightly pointed out! he comes creates a magic of his poems and then vanishes again for a break! : -)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 January 2014

This nice poem probably points to his existence. He is there and he is not there. Who can prove one thing or the other? One who tries to prove non-existence must search quite exhaustively. Thank you for a searching poem.

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Shahzia Batool 14 January 2014

: ((((((((((((((((((((! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Valsa George 14 January 2014

Yea, one little guy is missing...! I too wonder where he is... Like you and I, there are many more left in suspense! He is too tiny to be shut in a MAGIC BOX...! After the vanishing trick, he may be waiting to re emerge from some other corner to cheer the audience with thunderous applause! Amazing write, Dinesh! A 10 for this!

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