Beyond a tracing how can you be there
If you are somewhere there around us?
I find not even an apparition assuring me
Of your tamed or wild presence in any shade
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So original, with lines of such intensity and mystery of a lifetime of confusion about the existence of him so beautifully blended into a suspenseful, intriguing puzzle! Superb write! !
I meant someone else absolutely missing Kavya... Chandrupatla sir, you said and unsaid it, Shahziaji, He is beyond a tracing, And Valsa madam, let them both emerge soon.
a hidden treasure! the poem carries a suspense throughout! but Sir may I know whom is this pointed to in particular...Is it the Magic Box guy that Valsa Mam has rightly pointed out! he comes creates a magic of his poems and then vanishes again for a break! : -)
This nice poem probably points to his existence. He is there and he is not there. Who can prove one thing or the other? One who tries to prove non-existence must search quite exhaustively. Thank you for a searching poem.
Yea, one little guy is missing...! I too wonder where he is... Like you and I, there are many more left in suspense! He is too tiny to be shut in a MAGIC BOX...! After the vanishing trick, he may be waiting to re emerge from some other corner to cheer the audience with thunderous applause! Amazing write, Dinesh! A 10 for this!
Quite intriguing expressions about suspense and mystery....worth the read!