Jimi Doyle

Rookie - 104 Points (Chicago)

Bill The Suicide - Poem by Jimi Doyle

cold grief or demented vacuum?

grey head in coffin
suicide neck

drunken sorry note (with misspellings)
something nice about everyone (i love you)
debts owed to companies (many thousands)
punk kids from the other marriage (haircuts at the wake)

martyrdom of dust and tedious fear

ordinary con job
with thank you notes and symmetry
(the wife who found his body)

Comments about Bill The Suicide by Jimi Doyle

  • Adeline Foster (11/30/2011 5:37:00 PM)

    Ah, so sad, A friend of yours? Well expressed and a good job. Read mine - Eternal Grief -
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  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (12/1/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    Graphic, very strong, and honest. You put it all together in these lines as matter-of-factly as possible, for suicides always cause a disruption of emotions and thoughts. (My brother did it and I wrote 'Frankie' for him.) 10+ (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2008 8:26:00 AM)

    drunken sorry note (with misspellings)
    hehe like that stuff when details come out like that
    nice shet: }
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 17, 2005

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 7, 2010

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