Bit Green.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Bit Green....

Rating: 5.0


There is always the black sheep
in the fields
and in our hearts
on the peep

I create
my own heart-wrenching worlds
why should a man ever worder border me
responded,
offended

not his
or hers
irritated

sweet smell
instantly fades away

sweeter say
in dismay

sweetest love
beyond all love
closest to divinity
just you and me
artistic view upon thee

once beautiful
forever beauty, magical

I'm a poet
loves to create,
from playground till real estate
these words do resonate

my own world
my own words
and all my words
used afterwards

there is always that black sheep
in our fields
on the peep

there is always that bit green thought
in our hearts
on the wrought

a softening
for the shattered soul
I thank Thee God
my body whole....


Photography and Design by Sylvia Frances Chan
"Navarra", the Netherlands.

© Sylvia Frances Chan
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Bit Green....
Saturday, December 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: artistic work
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Photography and Design by Sylvia Frances Chan
"Navarra", the Netherlands.

© Sylvia Frances Chan
Copyright Protected
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2017

Sweet smell instantly fades away and this is true. Sweetest love which we acquire from Divine does not fade away as this is eternally spiritual love. Green thoughts in mind motivate path of life as these are fresh and positive. We thank God ever. This artistic work is excellent work...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 December 2017

Thank you so much, Mr. Kumarmani, you are so well thought constantly, your feedback and comments mean a very lot to me. Thank YOU!

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