Silence Is The Entrance.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Silence Is The Entrance....

Rating: 4.9


Below the water surface
I put down my foundations
to build a house
with a tiny room
I can work, is never disturbed

Below the water surface
I see my inside
peculiar, the doors are mirror
I see myself knocking on the door

Below the water surface
I have just lost my way
suddenly there is a door open
the main gate of my soul

Below the water surface
I see my inside
silence is the absolute must
to the main gate to open,
the mirrors to remove
and so I see myself go inside

Nice to be there
nice to be in place to
Heaven in order to remain
in the interior, in this huge silence
have you met me, you raise me
with your love...

Silence is the Entrance
to the deepest me....



NOTE:
CHOSEN AS THE Member POEM OF THE DAY on AD.4 DEC 2017 IN POEM HUNTER.COMTHANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR POEM HUNTER TEAM!

Silence Is The Entrance....
Saturday, October 20, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,poem,youth day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nice to be there
nice to be in place to
Heaven in order to remain
in the interior, in this huge silence
have you met me, you raise me
with your love...

Silence is the Entrance
to the deepest me....


NOTE:
CHOSEN AS THE Member POEM OF THE DAY on AD.4 DEC 2017 IN POEM HUNTER.COMTHANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR POEM HUNTER TEAM!

Humbly Sylvie
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 02 January 2020

below the water surface" an excellent imagery basing which the poem is artistically constructed by an expert artist with valuable stones, gems, and natural rare elements where royal love with silence is required to enter and to raise the beloved..... Wonderful, really wonderful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2020

I so admired your interpretations, dear poet! So loveliest to say that. Your visit to my poem is most appreciated. God's Blessings!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2017

Below the water surface I see my inside silence was an absolute must to the main gate to open, the mirrors to remove and I see myself go inside Lovely poem so brilliantly composed with rich divine elegance. A huge 10 for the sharing. Congrats Ma'am for the poem of the day. Subhas

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

Thank you so much for your congrats and well meant kindest comment and feedback, Mr. Chakra. I appreciate that most highly.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

ADDITION: I was 20 when I created this poem, Sir.

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C N Premkumar 15 January 2022

Below the water surface I have just lost my way suddenly there is a door open the main gate of my soul. Beautiful lines with a stunning imagery. Brilliant.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2021

I lost my way below the water surface... great expression. Silence is the entrance... undeniable truth!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2021

Nice to be there nice to be in place to Heaven in order to remain in the interior, in this huge silence.......precious expression!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2021

It's truly a great poem with a precious message!

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 November 2021

A poem that mirrors a beautiful souls heartfelt emotions. I can relaye to this beautiful poem. Congratulations

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