Silence Is The Entrance.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Silence Is The Entrance....

Rating: 4.9


Below the water surface
I put down my foundations
to build a house
with a tiny room
I can work, is never disturbed

Below the water surface
I see my inside
peculiar, the doors are mirror
I see myself knocking on the door

Below the water surface
I have just lost my way
suddenly there is a door open
the main gate of my soul

Below the water surface
I see my inside
silence is the absolute must
to the main gate to open,
the mirrors to remove
and so I see myself go inside

Nice to be there
nice to be in place to
Heaven in order to remain
in the interior, in this huge silence
have you met me, you raise me
with your love...

Silence is the Entrance
to the deepest me....



NOTE:
CHOSEN AS THE Member POEM OF THE DAY on AD.4 DEC 2017 IN POEM HUNTER.COMTHANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR POEM HUNTER TEAM!

Silence Is The Entrance....
Saturday, October 20, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,poem,youth day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nice to be there
nice to be in place to
Heaven in order to remain
in the interior, in this huge silence
have you met me, you raise me
with your love...

Silence is the Entrance
to the deepest me....


NOTE:
CHOSEN AS THE Member POEM OF THE DAY on AD.4 DEC 2017 IN POEM HUNTER.COMTHANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR POEM HUNTER TEAM!

Humbly Sylvie
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 02 January 2020

below the water surface" an excellent imagery basing which the poem is artistically constructed by an expert artist with valuable stones, gems, and natural rare elements where royal love with silence is required to enter and to raise the beloved..... Wonderful, really wonderful

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2020

I so admired your interpretations, dear poet! So loveliest to say that. Your visit to my poem is most appreciated. God's Blessings!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2017

Below the water surface I see my inside silence was an absolute must to the main gate to open, the mirrors to remove and I see myself go inside Lovely poem so brilliantly composed with rich divine elegance. A huge 10 for the sharing. Congrats Ma'am for the poem of the day. Subhas

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

Thank you so much for your congrats and well meant kindest comment and feedback, Mr. Chakra. I appreciate that most highly.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

ADDITION: I was 20 when I created this poem, Sir.

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Bharati Nayak 29 December 2022

Silence is the Entrance to the deepest me....So beautiful poem! Without uttering a single word, love can be felt.I congratulate you for this poem being selected as the Poem of the Day on4th Dec.2017.

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Xavier Thomas 18 September 2022

Amen, as deep called to deep so doth the spirit of man to man

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soren Barrett 25 April 2022

Well done with a great metaphor below the surface there are currents and sounds but the peace is wonderful. A well grounded person is peaceful inside.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2022

Short or long, I feel so touched that much while pointing my fingers/hands to heavens, truly most loveliest words as comments and feedbacks here.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2022

WOW! What a most beautiful time these past hours, years and times, I am mesmerized by all commnets and responses

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