Below the water surface
I put down my foundations
to build a house
with a tiny room
I can work, is never disturbed
Below the water surface
I see my inside
peculiar, the doors are mirror
I see myself knocking on the door
Below the water surface
I have just lost my way
suddenly there is a door open
the main gate of my soul
Below the water surface
I see my inside
silence is the absolute must
to the main gate to open,
the mirrors to remove
and so I see myself go inside
Nice to be there
nice to be in place to
Heaven in order to remain
in the interior, in this huge silence
have you met me, you raise me
with your love...
Silence is the Entrance
to the deepest me....
NOTE:
CHOSEN AS THE Member POEM OF THE DAY on AD.4 DEC 2017 IN POEM HUNTER.COMTHANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR POEM HUNTER TEAM!
This is a very beautifully composed poem that draws you in from start to finish. It is thought prob
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'Silence Is The Entrance' is a profound and thought-provoking poem that invites readers to embark on their own journey of self-discovery through the power of silence.
Thank you so much, dear Silver Bird, your amazing response is greatest
Silence is the Entrance to the deepest me....So beautiful poem! Without uttering a single word, love can be felt.I congratulate you for this poem being selected as the Poem of the Day on4th Dec.2017.
Thank you so much dear Bharati, I was indeed looking for the poems with the mark of POD, thank you for this.
Amen, as deep called to deep so doth the spirit of man to man
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Below the water surface I see my inside silence was an absolute must to the main gate to open, the mirrors to remove and I see myself go inside Lovely poem so brilliantly composed with rich divine elegance. A huge 10 for the sharing. Congrats Ma'am for the poem of the day. Subhas