Bits Of You Poem by Dewald Viljoen

Bits Of You

Rating: 3.1

You ask me if I love you, even a little bit,
and I

I love you lots of bits.

I love the little gold bits in your brown eyes, .
I love the wet little bits of your full lips.
I love the breathless bits of your deep sighs.
I love the smooth curvy bits of your girlish hips.

I love the soft bits of your perfect thighs
I love the moist bits in your deep kisses
I love the silly bits of your little lies
I love the wild bits of your birthday wishes

but mostly I just love you to bits!

Miriam Maia Padua 26 October 2008

a piece so sweet....cute...passionate and very romantic......words of love so true....a 10 for you.............

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Kefentse Sathekge 25 August 2008

great work. you say it so peferctly. it flows with no effort. great poem

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Yonela Mali 18 April 2008

ooohhh this is so cute, i love it to bits

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Jurietta Duraan 09 April 2008

Very sweet... I imagine the scene where you are together and she asks you and you have to think fast to explain..... lovely.

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Shannon Wright 16 January 2008

Whimsical, a delight. -shannon

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Dewald Viljoen

Dewald Viljoen

Swakopmund, Namibia
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