Blanket Of Love! Poem by SALINI NAIR

Blanket Of Love!

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Reformation of mud is on
That mend there as a lonely cave
Zone was gloomy dale of wish
Swift of fear was there in tune

Left the corner with a swish
To match the lovely sniff of life
Rock that mantle inside a slit
Abandoned lay of life sometimes

Remind the past that stay in heart
A shower that haste inside heart
There the blanket sniffs with full heart
That swathe the dreams in a jingle

Loneliness quill mere movements
That lilts the haste in solitude
Deserted part that quench peace
Never feed the life for existence

Love blankets life in numbness
Though the wreck is eternal
Swathe it with a concealed shield
That protract as a heavenly field! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Monday, October 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Being alone for sometime is good...but the greatest shield is love itself..Without love, life will be deserted..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 October 2014

After going through twice I concluded this poem is in fact about the mother hood or reaching at thepoint of mother hood - Reformation of mud is on That mend there as a lonely cave Zone was gloomy dale of wish Swift of fear was there in tune nice poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 October 2014

Very insightful and very well composed......solitude is good but life spent without the basic like love is dreadful...... amazing write

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2014

remind the heart that stay in past a shower that haste inside heart good writing

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2014

Love blankets life in numbness Imagining love as a blanket in which ugliness of life is concealed is a lovely idea. A nice poem.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 20 October 2014

Never feed the life for existence a message for real life. Though the poem is comprehensive I felt it beautiful.

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