Blew Away Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Blew Away

Rating: 4.8


The storm blew away
Shelters overhead;
Held sway...
For hours on end

Tough to fend
they made it;
To smile; I tend
I guess not a misfit!

Quaint the ways
Packed ships
The busy quays
Off all energy strips

Hush has now fallen
Moon is slowly out;
Night smoky, shaken
Sudden this rainy bout!

Wet thoroughly
Emotions broken perhaps
Walked away duly
These no hardy mishaps

The coastal line far out
The waves still washing lengths inwards
Beach combed with scuttling crabs stout
Stars came out to twinkle shyly afterwards.......


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Halls 22 March 2012

A complex poem but you feel like your there in the storm, and I like it that much I want to read it over again! And the more you read it the more clearer it becomes. Excellent Malini.

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Rishit Desai 22 March 2012

Tough to fend they made it; To smile; I tend Brilliant work.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 March 2012

'tis such an elegant style and is very rhythmical! ! ! A magnificient piece of poetry! ! ! ! ! Top marks! ! ! !

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Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY
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