poet Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Blind Dancer

The blue, blind dancer slips on the floor,
And enhances the movement itself in an icy dance.
This woman is transformed
Alternatively
Into a blue bird
And vice versa.
More accurately,
She becomes a bird woman
For an absolute motion.
From the depth of her soul,
Divine lights
Begin to overflow the space.
Small crystal pieces belonging to her sad feeling
Become roughly cube-shaped pieces of ice.
They roll in the middle of nowhere.
The blue sound is necessary to expound those words
In a natural and ordinary sense...

Copyright © ® Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: blues, dance, dancing, bird

Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 21, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, July 1, 2017

Form: Blues Poem


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Comments about Blind Dancer by Marieta Maglas

  • Elena SanduElena Sandu (3/13/2010 4:02:00 PM)

    I fly with this words, thank you for sharing! Lovely! !

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  • Sandra Fowler (2/14/2010 12:33:00 AM)

    Your blind dancer is a poem in blue.
    Very compelling and beautiful. Your
    words have wings.10/10.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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  • Manuel OdenyManuel Odeny (1/5/2010 3:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful description will words potrayed vivvidly. ++10

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (12/1/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: forever yours


    hello Marietta.
    I promise i will get deeper in your work.
    I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts.

    kind regards

    stuiterdick

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  • Maegan Trafford (11/18/2009 11:53:00 AM)

    very meaningful write, well penned....
    10

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  • Lyssa Haley (11/18/2009 11:15:00 AM)

    Very touchy poem like while reading we get absorbed in it. I guess you deserve 10

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  • Edward Parsley (11/18/2009 10:55:00 AM)

    Some strong words, some wisedom within........great write!
    10

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  • Richard Breslin (11/18/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    A beautifully worded poem
    10

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  • Jeremy Wright (11/18/2009 9:05:00 AM)

    This poem brought tears in my eyes...
    10

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  • Afzal Shauq (11/6/2009 12:38:00 PM)

    For an absolute motion.
    From the depth of her soul,
    Divine lights
    Begin to overflow
    The space,
    And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning

    wow what a perfect and meaningful poem.. expressed in a very poetic and sweet way..innovation in thought and the composition of words and verses is professionally done... love this poem...hmmm really a great and very great one..10/10

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  • Ramin ChamanRamin Chaman (10/27/2009 2:25:00 PM)

    A humanist poem.and humanity ..really a nice poem... from a good poetess ///

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  • Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 7:51:00 AM)

    nice poem....thank you for sharing
    10

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  • Chesney Russell (8/15/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    I love the idea of a blind dancer, I look around and try copying others when I dance, and pretty much constantly hash it up. In a way I wish I was a blind poetry reader, without influence, just me and my own style.
    Cool, thanks.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2009 5:02:00 AM)

    The space,
    And give it the appropriate, necessary meaning

    it is work of third eye with common sense and intense training.. beautiful write with vivd description and depth....10

    read mine' no separate ways, tragic end and sister in lasw

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (6/20/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    Nice poem to read! Floating or dancing it is difficult to feel!

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  • Justin M. Banks (6/16/2009 3:42:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading this poem. Nice flow, and I always welcome them when they're short...

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  • Rory Hudson (6/15/2009 3:56:00 AM)

    A very appealing image and a poem with a lot of meaning to it.

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  • Autumn Stoddard (6/14/2009 9:24:00 PM)

    The imagery is great in this particular poem.

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  • Lucero Flores (6/10/2009 11:38:00 PM)

    wow...that was very deep I LOVE IT. That is a very good peom, keep up the good work! ! !

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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (5/25/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    Very deep allusions...............good

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