Blocked Poem by M.J. Lemon

Blocked

Rating: 5.0


The whole way is blocked
The other side claims a part
Give it back right now!

Thursday, January 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 12 July 2017

When desire get prohibited from its zone, dream never grow, then to make it reality it then never be one. Blocked, welll they can block you, but there is another way to be better or alternative to reach out hahahaha if they dont let you, thats fine...the lost what you can bring, and your give other to grow...

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Mj Lemon 12 July 2017

Soul, I think you are absolutely right. Maybe teh only effective way to get around what is causing the blockage....is to change the goal. But how many people are trapped, and confuse dreams and aspirations with never making any revisions? You raise a thought-provoking issue.

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Muhammad Ali 11 July 2017

it is always the other side. :)

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

Absolutely! Often the barrier is not a physical instrument...It is the reality of the other side, and the fact there may be no connection to that other side.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2016

It seems like Almost Bukowski did a pretty decent job of unblocking the blocked!

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Mj Lemon 15 November 2016

Thanks, Richard. Strange, but I think that at times writers' block can actually help. I wonder if Buk would agree?

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Bri Edwards 06 November 2016

well, PH seems to have blocked me from going to the 2nd page of your poems! reminds me of my visit to the Berlin Wall this year, graffiti-covered now; no blood noticed..............by me. bri ;)

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Mj Lemon 07 November 2016

And I just got unblocked...So many walls, real and some metaphorical or figurative. I had both in mind when writing this. But I did not recall the Berlin Wall....

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Melvina Germain 16 October 2015

Pay back time, give it up...interesting.....

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Mj Lemon 16 October 2015

When I wrote this, I was thinking that being in the middle is sometimes...not the best place to be.

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