Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 2) Poem by Theany Ouy

Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 2)

Rating: 3.9


Executed by love...
A weapon of mass destruction,
Torn between everything
My heart becomes dysfunction.
An attack so cruel...
That one heart cannot hold to defend,
Level of disability is low
This battle must come to an end.
Only memories remain
Leaving trails of blood behind,
Once the rain has washed away...
The tracks will be hard to find.
Hallucination takes view
A moment of death reveals,
Your absence penetrates through my soul,
Has caused my heart to drown in tears.
Retrieve your attack
For I have long awaited,
To defend and take victory...
My love will retaliate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

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Oluwole Michael 10 November 2011

this is great writes

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Oluwole Michael 10 November 2011

i like this poem......very vivid

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John Raubenheimer 06 November 2011

'Once the rain has washed away/the tracks will be hard to find... ' words of prescience from the thick of battle.

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Stan Petrovich 01 May 2015

Theany, I now edit PoitryHaus.com & wish you would join. We only have 40-something members and nobody is posting enough (except me I guess) .

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Stan Petrovich 07 December 2011

Exceptionally better than Chaoter! ....

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Ambitions provoking in this one.Greatly done by over boundary imaginations and milieu...

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

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