Like a desert my heart drys out
only memories will i remember you by
Like the ocean, it will go on
For eternity....
A mountain of pains that only death
Would heal
A heart broke into two
An endless torture that could kill
A cry that could be heard
throughout the barren of the sea
my heart dies....
Without you
Depression expressed in the feeling of wanting to die. Do not despair, for I can see beauty in your words and someone with beauty will always end up with someone kind and true to love.
thumbs up this is a great poem.its really emotional.your word you used can be pictured to get the really understanding of your work piece.congratulations.
your words touch my soul...beautiful write..love your style, very refreshing..blessings
wowo that was amazing i just loved it it was breath taking ur an amazing wrtiter keep going breath taking i dont even have words for it its so good
food for body, thought for mind and prayer for soul! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! if your heart died soul remains! ! ! ! give something to soul it will cure the broken heart! ! ! ! ! ! really a nice poem but ending the poem without a hope is sad! ! ! ! ! but it shows the intensity of love! but departed love never ends it always remain in our mind bcoz of its pain! ! ! ! !
my heart nearly died when i lost one, but my inner strength was stronger than my grief and i cope admirally. you will be strong if you believe in yourself and survive a tsunami of grief for lost love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I wish I could quench the lines so fiery! Hot! honest lines...