Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 1) Poem by Theany Ouy

Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 1)

Rating: 4.6


Love is a battle
That makes us weak
A battle of the heart
That one cannot defeat
When my mind takes control
My body begins to surrender
Leaving a wound behind
For the heart to remember
Insanity attempts victory
Losing my ways of thoughts
Defeat the undefeated
Were the battles I was taught
Without you, my heart bleeds
Injuries upon my soul
Blood stained memories
Are the ones beyond my control
With toil, tears and sweat
Love as my choice of weapon
But to no avail
Has put my heart in execution

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diana Rose Tolentino 04 November 2011

its a battlefield indeed. i love the emotion and the flow of words. this is really a nice piece of literary art. thank you.. diane

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Richard McClellan 04 November 2011

Yes, love is a battlefield... Nice free style poem...

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

beautiful write...you emote very well....touching thx.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 05 November 2011

Very descriptive.

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Tasha Scott 05 November 2011

i really like this cant wait to read the next chapter! ! ! ! !

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Daemon Waltom 18 February 2021

I love this chaper, it brings backs memories. You find a way to express feelings as it is and that is so pwerful.

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Ramesh Rai 25 January 2012

love is expressed in wonderful words. nice poem

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Antonio Liao 01 December 2011

a Wonder of lines like a dose of medicine that conquer our Hearts....Congratulation my Dear Friend...God bless

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Amir Forougi 13 November 2011

A great fiery sense of love and its experience whether bitter or sweet....Nice Work

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Oluwole Michael 10 November 2011

this is beautiful! i love it. love love love, it always makes our countenance to fall.....good write.

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