As the morning hits
Give way to the sun,
Another day without you
Has begun.
Days will go by
Our times will grow near,
Some tomorrow you'll turn
And I'll be there.
As i lay my head
And go to sleep,
It's only of us
I dream so deep.
Now the sun is setting into the hills,
With stabbing pains
My heart it fills.
Hand in hand we're together,
from that day on
It will be forever.....
A passionate poem indeed.This is the fresh feeling for one's lover or beloved.it tends to be eternal.Great!
amazing....you are so filled with passion...again, you reach out to my soul and touch a place where I understand every word....check out a song by Leonard Cohan...In my Secret Life.... You just might enjoy his works...hugs n blessings
how great your love is! ! ! ! beautifully written, nice work shows that you an emotional poet! ! ! ! !
Affective lines, conveying lovely emotions and the dream of 'being together forever'. Nice flow in rhyming likewise.
Though it seems that only the memory just be forever.. again..nice deeper emotions
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem! I only wish I had thought of it. Thanks for sharing.