Theany Ouy

Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 3) - Poem by Theany Ouy

Retaliation has commenced
This battle I will prevail,
A mission I must complete
To accomplish not to fail.
No mercy, no sorrows...
No more tears,
Creatures of mortalities
Cannot be feared.
My heart perceived insightfully
But will overcome the pains,
The soldier in myself marched
For the honors I have gained.
I've learned to separate
My heart from my mind,
Destroyed and take over
All that made us blind.
Courageous as I am,
I stand as a warrior...
Victory in my hands,
Therefore, I am a true survivor.

Comments about Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 3) by Theany Ouy

  • (12/7/2011 3:49:00 AM)

    I was disappointer in thid unltimate Chapter.The final fived lines border on cliche. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/13/2011 2:17:00 AM)

    Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear... (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (11/7/2011 2:05:00 PM)

    'The soldier in myself marched' That's very braved, a lovely job! (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2011 11:45:00 AM)

    'The soldier in myself marched/for the honours I have gained.... ' pointing the way onward to victory, discipline of thought. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 11:52:00 PM)

    are you in the army or something like that? you sound like a true warrior! ! ! ! this is beautiful! ! ! i love it! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 6:26:00 AM)

    have to agree with james...your soul speaks your pain..your writing style, I like very much...thanks for sharing...blessings (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 5:30:00 AM)

    really good to read your poems............well written (Report) Reply

  • (11/4/2011 12:12:00 PM)

    very good...indeed.
    found it really engrossing...
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  • Richard McClellan (11/4/2011 8:53:00 AM)

    Nice, out of all 3 I like #2 the best! ! ! Happy writing... (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2011 3:47:00 AM)

    'Blood Stained Memories' - Chapters 1,2, and 3, - are a rich contribution to the 'Love as War' subgenre of Love Poetry. I like the way you called love 'a weapon of mass destruction, ' and I can relate to the Speaker's having separated her heart from her head. These poems are grim; but all too often love is, too. (Report) Reply

  • (10/31/2011 2:33:00 AM)

    Love though brings with it misery and pain, should not be allowed to become weakness but instead make it your strength to win the battle of life and come out as a warrior.
    An inspirational poem. Victory for the poet, no doubt! ! !
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  • (10/30/2011 4:19:00 PM)

    You are not just a survivor but the winner of this battle... coz you got over your sorrows; when you've learned to separate your heart from your mindand that's your powerful weapon (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2011 2:40:00 PM)

    All three poems was very very good.
    I enjoyed reading them.
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  • Ebi Robert (10/29/2011 8:46:00 AM)

    nicely done.......i like the pattern. (Report) Reply

  • Ebi Robert (10/29/2011 8:44:00 AM)

    nicely done.......i like the pattern. (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (10/29/2011 4:31:00 AM)

    really a recovery from a sweet sorrow relation. implanting a new life.. without complaints but have some sweet pain inside..... gud luck for your rest life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2011 3:39:00 PM)

    Inspirational indeed, wonderfully written, nice words there.... (Report) Reply

  • Marcus Mckinley (10/27/2011 1:03:00 PM)

    a self moral victory for you. well done (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (10/27/2011 12:10:00 PM)

    A poignant end to this collection of poems with an improved flow. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (10/27/2011 9:04:00 AM)

    I have read the three poems a few times.
    I try to interpret, but I may be wrong: Was the loss of a loved one leading to an addiction that you have successfully overwon through reasoning and strength of willpower? If that is the underlying story, it is really a fantastic one. Overwinning such an enemy is really a great victory. If my interpretation is completely wrong, please forgive me.
    Whatever, it is, enjoy the victory.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 18, 2008

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