Theany Ouy


Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 2) - Poem by Theany Ouy

Executed by love...
A weapon of mass destruction,
Torn between everything
My heart becomes dysfunction.
An attack so cruel...
That one heart cannot hold to defend,
Level of disability is low
This battle must come to an end.
Only memories remain
Leaving trails of blood behind,
Once the rain has washed away...
The tracks will be hard to find.
Hallucination takes view
A moment of death reveals,
Your absence penetrates through my soul,
Has caused my heart to drown in tears.
Retrieve your attack
For I have long awaited,
To defend and take victory...
My love will retaliate.


Comments about Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 2) by Theany Ouy

  • (5/1/2015 7:20:00 PM)


    Theany, I now edit PoitryHaus.com & wish you would join. We only have 40-something members and nobody is posting enough (except me I guess) . (Report) Reply

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  • (12/7/2011 3:46:00 AM)


    Exceptionally better than Chaoter! .... (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2011 2:26:00 AM)


    Ambitions provoking in this one.Greatly done by over boundary imaginations and milieu... (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2011 2:16:00 AM)


    Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear... (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2011 2:13:00 AM)


    Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear... (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2011 2:12:00 AM)


    Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear... (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2011 2:12:00 AM)


    Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear... (Report) Reply

  • Oluwole Michael (11/10/2011 12:45:00 PM)


    this is great writes (Report) Reply

  • Oluwole Michael (11/10/2011 12:39:00 PM)


    i like this poem......very vivid (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2011 11:41:00 AM)


    'Once the rain has washed away/the tracks will be hard to find... ' words of prescience from the thick of battle. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 11:50:00 PM)


    this is getting good! ! ! ! ! =) (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 9:18:00 AM)


    Again, very descriptive. (Try, 'Surprise, Surprise' when you have time. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2011 6:23:00 AM)


    again, I feel your soul in this, and that makes is a good write....but..I can also relate very well...blessings (Report) Reply

  • Richard McClellan (11/4/2011 8:51:00 AM)


    I like this one better than #1... more rhyming... :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/3/2011 4:48:00 AM)


    retaliation and violence dominates the mood of this poem, but in actually sense the poet hope to bring victory and happiness after all her moment of persecution because of love. Good work fellow bard. (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2011 4:05:00 PM)


    ...'Your absence penetrates through my soul,
    Has caused my heart to drown in tears.
    Retrieve your attack
    For I have long awaited,
    To defend and take victory...
    My love will retaliate. '

    nothing to say just very...very...very Awsome poem away from any technical analysis of this poem especially this part it is Romantic
    a battle that ends up with Romantic I said 'end with romance ' without knowing what's in the Chapter III hahaha...
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  • (10/30/2011 2:36:00 PM)


    Another great poem. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • Ebi Robert (10/29/2011 8:39:00 AM)


    magically made. i love your crowning. you gave love her real place. (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (10/29/2011 4:26:00 AM)


    really emotional and sweet pain in it.loved it! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Marcus Mckinley (10/27/2011 1:00:00 PM)


    this poem has a rough tempo compared to the first.
    have you read my poem; This lovely mess
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 18, 2008


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