Alicia Roseberry

Rookie (11/26/1992 / cincinnati)

Bloody Mess - Poem by Alicia Roseberry

shes left in the middle of the room,
beaten and broken,
she crys out in the night,
no one around,
to say its alright,
shes bleeding from unknown places,
she passes out in the bloody mess,
her husband gone,
never to return,
she lays there slowly bleeding out,
the baby inside her,
no longer alive,
her husband killed her and left a bloody mess,
with tears and blood stained to her face,
she gave her life,
for her husbands bloody mess

Comments about Bloody Mess by Alicia Roseberry

  • (2/19/2010 2:01:00 PM)

    That was really deep. I know somewhere this has happened and it's just awful : ( So sad, but great write. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/3/2009 8:33:00 PM)

    I liked the details you gave in the poem. Very discripted. I wouldn't use the name of the title throught the poem. Just a suggestion. (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2009 5:41:00 AM)

    Quite scary. We all need to work and pray that such as this cease to happen.
    A good write up.
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  • (4/19/2009 6:21:00 AM)

    a terrifying poetic story, though this exist in reality battered wife rising rates today...around the globe...dreadful opus written so well.............10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 18, 2009

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