Blue Still Bestirs Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Blue Still Bestirs

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Oh what mellifluous tunes rippling by the breeze
when mellowed by the myth when embraced
rose when looks brilliant by the red
the art of magnificence razzles in glow

the beholder still stands and stares
the fragrance still respires by the green
the art when thought provoking by the petals
sticking all its colors of love when inkling

breath still expends by the blue when bestirs
sky lies grey in askance wishful of last moon
even when locked up by dark phase of the cycle
warmth seems to flint by the fire when besotted

sun yet descends into the ocean when wild
yet raves up by the bedazzled blue
eyes twinkles by the heart when intense
thrumming in by the quake of love in ascension

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 02 June 2008

Wonderfully expressed thoughts! Vidi has already expressed my feelings in praise! -RajNandy New Delhi

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Vidi Writes 04 May 2008

Among all wonders of nature This poem upholds The beauty, hope and love Of Blue Sky. The whole earth is Blue When looked from distant space A hopeful, lovely place to live in. Cummings said - “I thank you God for this most amazing day, for the leaping greenly spirits of trees, and for the BLUE Dream of Sky and for everything which is natural, which is infinite, which is yes.” A tribute to Blue Sky Thank you.

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Abha Sharma 21 April 2008

Your lines make the reader stare at the lines full of nature imagery… all the entities of nature conspire to make a close impact on the heart of man which gives solace to him and drives his thoughts away from mortality…wonderful composition with deep insight into nature….

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Thad Wilk 21 April 2008

Amazing imagery soft and flowing as is the love capture in this write! ! *10*! ! Great read Dr. Kar! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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