Bobbie Jo's Shoes Poem by jim foulk

Bobbie Jo's Shoes

Rating: 5.0


Bobbie Jo went
to town to buy
some shoes, but
once again she was
told, no shoes here.

'Now, Now repiled Bobbie
Jo, why no shoes.'
'Can't you see
Bobbie Jo, right,

in front of you,
the store burned
down last night.'

Poor Bobbie Joe,
she can't win,
for losing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 20 April 2007

Great style of writing Jim. all the best, poor Bobby Jo Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 11 April 2007

Bobbie Joe is a wonderful character. Now we know she loves hats and shoes. It is to be hoped that we will hear more of her. Lovely write, Jim. Warm regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 10 April 2007

Poor Silly Bobbie Jo and clever you for penning this. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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David Harris 09 April 2007

Jim, I just loved the humour that ran through this lovely piece. The next time I go shopping for shoes I'll make sure the shop hasn't burnt down first. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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