Boredom Comments

Yes, we are bored because we have too much freedom and, on other occasions, just the opposite lol. It's hard to please oneself.

very intresting i like this poem

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‘Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain…’ Like tasteful new recipe thro’ wise thoughts with ingredients of words. Great learning Sir. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom?

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restriction and no freedom..........10

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom............10

Our vision widens the horizon.If we get engrossed into routines, growth eludes us. Our purpose should be to reach the ultimate objective and ignore small routines, otherwise boredom is bound to come.

intelligent rhyme, simple and vivid wit, taste remains in the mind, like a good coffee, long after you've had it. :) 10/10. Way to go Mister!

High rise or fame is matter of essence You may feel rightly with HIS presence All names and honour may be useless in his absence False stardom or freedom may have no sense These words sum it all! Inspiring words to the reader.

Nothing to hide and nothing to seek Look so powerful and not to look weak Almighty may help to achieve the goal As diamonds are dug from thick black coal this is the most stanza i liked...and in general, your poem is very meaningfull...and the rhyme is so nice...great interesting work friend :) I wish to get rid of the boredom i feel during vacations...lol! !

Nothing to hide and nothing to seek Look so powerful and not to look weak Almighty may help to achieve the goal As diamonds are dug from thick black coal this is the most stanza i liked...and in general, your poem is very meaningfull...and the rhyme is so nice...great interesting work friend :) I wish to get rid of the boredom i feel during vacations...lol! !

well that's one way to get rid of boredom.....interesting write....i'm sure that stars get bored....but hey they can just buy something to entertain them......though material matter is only amusing for a short while.....good write

you are an incredible poet please teach me how you write! ! ! ! ? ? ? thanks alot for letting me read this piece......i like your poetry very much and i hope i can write like you one day...

'You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restriction and no freedom' That's great write. The poem is very good and the rhyme is great. Thanks for sharing with me

The poem is fantastic and the rhyme is fantastic too...10 Merna

Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restrict.........10

Guided by others on important matters Reading on doted line by merely looking at letters....10

Individuality will be on vane Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain...........10