Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Boredom

Rating: 4.9

You will feel boredom
Even if u reach stardom
Is there any sense or wisdom?
If there is restriction and no freedom

Individuality will be on vane
Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain
Guided by others on important matters
Reading on doted line by merely looking at letters

You have everything at your disposal
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Sachin Goswami 13 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom?

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Sagarika Shah 03 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restriction and no freedom..........10

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Twinkle Vohra 03 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom............10

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 02 September 2009

Our vision widens the horizon.If we get engrossed into routines, growth eludes us. Our purpose should be to reach the ultimate objective and ignore small routines, otherwise boredom is bound to come.

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Mystic Indian 01 September 2009

intelligent rhyme, simple and vivid wit, taste remains in the mind, like a good coffee, long after you've had it. :) 10/10. Way to go Mister!

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Yes, we are bored because we have too much freedom and, on other occasions, just the opposite lol. It's hard to please oneself.

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Anthony Feghaly 15 October 2009

very intresting i like this poem

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

thank you..................

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

Please favor me reading my new posts. Ms.N

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

‘Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain…’ Like tasteful new recipe thro’ wise thoughts with ingredients of words. Great learning Sir. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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