Both Suffer Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Both Suffer

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Both suffer
Friday,9th October 2020

Love and fate
clearly state
make an honest appearance
or get disappearance

centuries have passed,
the love scene is not changed
either side suffer
as blind lovers

there is rupture
in love later
someone breaks promises
and misses the bus

girls suffer more
as they adore
love from the heart
boys ditch them from the start

girls are not a sex object
so react badly
don't give up that easily
but take it to heart seriously

let the love be taken as a divine gift,
with the commitment not to shift
from their promises
and cause the surprises

Dr Jadia Hasmukh

Both Suffer
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2020

from their promises and cause the surprises Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2020

Harinder CheemaAuthor Hasmukh Mehta Thank you so much for your response and comment🙏. Yes Sir we need to treat women with respect 1 Hide or report this Like · Reply · 1d

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2020

welcome harinder cheema 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 2m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 October 2020

oem: 59342716 - Both Suffer Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: This is so sad if honesty and love disappear. Humanity should have all these values for development of society. An amazing poem is well penned

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 October 2020

Poem: 59342716 - Both Suffer Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: This is so sad if honesty and love disappear. Humanity should have all these values for development of society. An amazing poem is well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2020

This is so sad if honesty and love disappear. Humanity should have all these values for development of society. An amazing poem is well penned.

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