Branch (Haiku) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Branch (Haiku)



The withered branches
Broken rhythms of my heart
Does she cares to know?

Monday, March 18, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: branches
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetima Baruah Sarma 12 October 2013

Pensive thoughts well expressed through this haiku!

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Queeny Gona 10 October 2013

Beautiful read and as I am keen to write haikus, I loved reading this!

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Heather Wilkins 06 June 2013

I adore haikus. they look so simple but they are difficult to write. So few words are used it takes a skilled poet. nice work

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Zubiya Surti 31 March 2013

sir, I have heard Haikus though small leave a tremendous impact, so does yours.I too want to learn to express my thoughts in haikus. So sir kindly keep writing more haikus so that i can reflect.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2013

Love, pure. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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