He fought with rare grit
And more so when hit,
His pyre as if lit.
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Inspired by India's Most Fearless (in two parts) by
Shiv Aroor & Rahul Singh
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Senryu |13.12.2019|
Topic: battlefield, brave, war, soldiers, death
A great Haiku sir! Appreciated and admired..........................10+++++++++
'A great haiku', thanks, and an endearing feedback, dear poet.
Poets often step back and comment on happenings as a witness, the way soul does the happenings around it, without emotionally involving.
Soldiers sold for war! ! ! Wickedness of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
With apologies, dear EKL, I know you are a peace-loving soul who is against all wars, and despite this you appreciate read and appreciate it, Commendable, many thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Some fight till fit, Some all belief beat, And grievously fight when hit.// yeah right you are
'Yeah right you are' as you say, but how far 'right' goes? Thanks dear MB