! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***brazen Cup Of Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***brazen Cup Of Sorrow***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.9


Silence riffles as heart dapples grey
Warmth when loses gloss as lurid sunset
And night ruefully loses eyes of light
Does world cries by adieu of sun?

night gleans tears in frosty eyes
dew sobs deep on reef of darkness
Passion slumbers by slandered arm of tonight
Unto last dregs mist rused to clouds

Yet sun may rise in the east to west
Waking universe from pangs of shadow
Nature smiles by flames of delight
Do we ever know reason of reasons as betides?

Earthly dusts breath again by unison unearthly
rolling stream is limitless by brim of eternity
a mortal may be ephemeral by time and space
as emptiness of wine by a brazen cup of sorrow

And I do remember lofty days halcyon
being cradled on lap of innocence luminous yester
I am as I am- a manifestation of moments
Immortal grace of love as ethereal is yet untold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 12 July 2010

Your poem feels and expresses 'Brazen cup of sorrow' that's filled with a' dapple heart'/ lurid sunset'that's pours out on over the page. Great poem with such pleasing natural metaphors that gives one a feeling of calm and peace even while drinking the brazen cup of sorrow. Good Job, Dr Kar

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Sandra Martyres 28 March 2010

A really well thought out and beautifully crafted poem Subhendu

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Chitra - 28 March 2010

a poignant heart-stirring write on the flipside of life...loss of a near and dear one is inevitable...but the memories and moments spent with the beloved ones are immortal.

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Marieta Maglas 25 March 2010

very well written poem, well expressed ideas, thank you for sharing.10

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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