Dr subhendu kar

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! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***gloss Of Kiss..Ii ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

In deep of night by dream
I hear swash of breeze
As I open door of blue
I see moment slushing me

of yonder beauty billowing
whites of moon entices me to temptation
gloss of kisses endears
swooning my pangs of grief into obscurity

mirth reaches me to enlighten darkness
by spark of freshness renewed
as I search coffin of sorrow
Yet it seemed sloshing by eyes


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  • Cristina Teodor (6/23/2011 5:38:00 PM)


    Beautiful imagery, intensity of emotions conveyed by a deep innate sense of poetry with a philosophical resonance..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

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  • (8/22/2010 1:27:00 AM)


    very beautiful...i can't express my words well, but if u can read my mind, you will know how i appreciated this work of yours... (Report) Reply

  • (8/20/2010 12:25:00 PM)


    This Gloss of Kiss is really very refreshing...waning off a muffled cry somewhere deep inside....Loved reading this one.... (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2010 3:31:00 AM)


    ‘gloss of kisses endears
    swooning my pangs of grief into obscurity’ ~ Wow ~


    ‘Perfect kiss
    Croons catharsis
    Into musing mitosis
    Not in mute meiosis
    Only neo noesis
    Rhapsodic riotous
    Vive virtuous
    Into blotto bliss
    And blossoming bliss
    It’s perfect kiss.’ ~ niv [from my unpublished poetry]…

    Excellent magic majestic joy ride …thro’ your poetry I’ve jockeyed myself into ‘It’s Perfect Kiss’ … thanks for sharing
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/14/2010 12:02:00 PM)


    Swati

    COMMENT:

    The poem has an excellent soothing effect on mind.All of us when abraded by stark realities develop some mental bruises which need to be healed by a gentle coat of balm.My feeling after reading the poem is as if it is some such tranquilizer.At peak of night, swayed by breeze, engulfed into the halo of moon, we are able to alienate our sorrows. We then can step on the threshold of newness.

    Wonderful usage of words and great imageries. Thanks Subhendu for such a gift.
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  • (8/12/2010 9:58:00 AM)


    Charming, tender words a 'Gloss of Kiss that can enlighten the darkness...captivating poem! a 10+ (Report) Reply

  • (8/11/2010 11:24:00 AM)


    Facinating poem, with deep content. Masterfully written; D (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (8/11/2010 6:15:00 AM)


    mirth reaches me to enlighten darkness
    by spark of freshness renewed
    as I search coffin of sorrow

    Coffin of sorrow...... well planted evaporation of human bleed. Who holds such fathoms in poetic imagination, He is fit to en-light the darkness. Beginning line of dreaming here gets its footstep on reality perhaps. So a total poem here has been knitted undoubtedly. Rich its marching gravity and.......

    Regards,
    10+
    pranab
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/9/2010 3:13:00 PM)


    A very philosophical view and a deep insight (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 8, 2010



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