Bre@k Free Poem by tanvi damle

Bre@k Free

Rating: 3.3


All your life you've been doing things
that others think are the best for you,
but now its your chance to do something
that you love to do.
It's never too late to follow your heart,
give yourself a chance
& make a brand new start.
Be proud to be you,
go ahead make your dreams come true.
Do your thing, make your mark,
bring out the talent,
that creative spark.
Break free, spread your wings
and learn how to fly,
don't hesitate to touch the sky.
Go ahead, fulfill your desires and your dreams,
make the sun jealous by shining brighter than him.
And once day you'll be
giving a speech on the stage
telling the story of your crowning glory,
saying I'm proud to be me.
Telling the crowd with your head held high,
to break free,
spread their wings,
and learn how to fly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 January 2010

awesome write here! wow!

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Blissful Anonymity 21 January 2010

nice write.. :) keep writing, and keep it coming.. :)

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Bernard Snyder 15 March 2011

I've become a true fan of yours Tanvi! Keep doing your thing. I've also given this one a 10! When you get a chance, don't forget to rate my materials as well! Thanks in advance.

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Clarissa Dee 25 January 2010

beautifully written, has a great message, a nice read!

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Aira Olayvar 24 January 2010

Refreshing read! Free of mediocrity… it is really inspiring, heart-warming.

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Peter Strugnell 23 January 2010

i really identify with this one!

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Darlene Styles 22 January 2010

i really like it. its very good :)

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