tanvi damle

And Forg! Ve Me....

You forgive me for loving you too much,
and I'll forgive you for not loving me enough.
You forgive me for raising you so high,
and I'll forgive you for making me cry.
You forgive me for begging you to stay,
and I'll forgive you for walking away.
You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
and I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for thinking of you all night,
and I'll forgive you for not treating me right.
You forgive me for waiting by the phone to answer your call,
and I'll forgive you for not calling at all.
You forgive me for giving you my heart,
and I'll forgive you for breaking it apart.
You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
and I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
Forgiveness brings inner peace,
so do we have a deal?

Poem Submitted: Monday, January 18, 2010

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  • Bernard SnyderBernard Snyder (3/15/2011 5:31:00 PM)

    Very nicely done Tanvi! I like the way you ended it! 'Do we have a deal'(lol)

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  • Sarvesh Kulkarni (3/13/2010 3:12:00 AM)

    awesome.
    the poem ends with a bang.
    loved it.
    keep writing.
    wonderfully penned down.
    thank you very much.

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  • Braja K Sarkar (2/8/2010 4:15:00 AM)

    Hi Tanvy, Thank you for sharing your poem.It is a nice poem indeed.I have enjoyed it

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (2/1/2010 9:22:00 AM)

    very touching piece.straight from the heart.brilliant writing.lol.

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  • Dr.ram Mehta (1/23/2010 7:44:00 PM)

    Yes, it's a beautiful poem with good expressions

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  • Afzal Shauq (1/23/2010 12:36:00 PM)

    perfect..sweeet... well written and meaningful... the idea is as rich as it has expressed with a unique way... quite impressive is this poem...loved it 10/10

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  • Jake Shelvey (1/23/2010 11:23:00 AM)

    Great poem, really well flowed and gr8 use of repetition

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  • Peter StrugnellPeter Strugnell (1/23/2010 2:14:00 AM)

    i like the sentiments of this one it echoes a bit in my poem 'i'm a liar and your a fake', it is good to get these feelings out and done with

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  • g black black (1/22/2010 6:51:00 PM)

    awww thas cute whoo

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  • Whispering Rose (1/22/2010 8:20:00 AM)

    woww i love this one, although forgivness brings peace sometimes it's peaceful not to forgive everything and everyone

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  • Luke Easter (1/19/2010 4:39:00 PM)

    And Forgive You Not!

    You forgive me for loving you too much;
    I forgave you for not loving me enough.
    You forgive me for raising you so high;
    I forgave you for the many tears I cried.
    .
    You forgive me for begging you to stay,
    And I will thank you for walking away,
    You never appreciated love on my heart,
    That means it’s good thing we are apart.

    I forgive me for thinking of you all night,
    You selfish and for not treating me right,
    No waiting by my cell to answer your call,
    I hope you’ll never dial this number at all.

    Love tender as flowers refined as solid gold,
    But you ripped it apart destroying the mold,
    Forgiveness brought inner peace to my soul,
    Sadness locked in the past for I’m in control.

    A lesson earned through heartache? Rebound!
    This time a soul mate to share quiet or sound,
    Left for naught on the bottom I sprung to the top,
    Nothing but an advantage taker I forgive you not.

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  • Allie Lusha (1/19/2010 10:58:00 AM)

    Wow Tanvi... I'm with you right here on this one my current situation couldnt be better portrayed I love it You are certainly one of my favourite keep writing girl! ! ! ! you have a talent! !

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  • David Mountain (1/19/2010 2:06:00 AM)

    Very nice, reads well. David M

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