Break Free Poem by Arti Chopra

Break Free

Rating: 5.0
 


I see your eyes
they tell me of suffering untold
I see your arms stiffen
they are longing to hold
I see your walk, its stiff,
theres tension unfound
I hear forced laughter
an eerie sound
where is the joy
the light in your eyes
where is the sway of your hips
your body language belies
where is the warmth
the chatter so free
i see only restraint and
measured words said carefully
where is the sweetness
the willing and the spontaniety
where is the dancing, the jokes and the gaiety
is it really you
or is it a different entity?
break free, be yourself
let it be..........
you have done so much
with your heart and all sincerity
but this is not what you deserve
this is not what was meant to be
break free, fly away if you want
dont waste this life, break the fetters
break free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 September 2016

you have done so much with your heart and all sincerity but this is not what you deserve this is not what was meant to be break free, fly away if you want dont waste this life, break the fetters break free Beautiful poem with so deep and intense, passionate feelings. Thanks for sharing it.10 marks for it. Subhas

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Indranil Bhaduri 30 July 2013

Great poem in full depth. Thank you for gifting this.

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mohsin amin khan 09 May 2010

i see in you the depth that speaks with the smile words which are pious and emotional really a great poem i love your poetry madam

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