Suraj Samtani

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Break Up Beyond Patch Up - Poem by Suraj Samtani

You dislike how we don't talk to each other.

I dislike how we now can't walk together.

You want a boy just for company,

I detest a toy not worth my money.

You found in me a great writer,

But in you I never once saw my reader.

You want to reestablish our contact,

But I just want our memories intact.

Oh please, just let me be.

I'm sure you'll find another 'he'.

Someone somewhere is already there.

In him is the answer to your every gear.

He will have greater patience than mine, &

He will see everything in you as just fine.

His love for you will be bountiful, &

You will see him as just wonderful.

Please don't harbor anymore thoughts with me.

Let's now release each other with glee.

From each other we indeed learnt a lot,

But sadly we are two peas not from the same pot.

I really never envisioned the risk,

But together we are now like a slipped disk.

Our togetherness can never stand, &

Our union is like a dysfunctional gland.

In overcoming this lies our greatest strength,

We'll then ascend by immeasurable length.

To you I have nothing more to say,

Than to thank you for coming my way.

Comments about Break Up Beyond Patch Up by Suraj Samtani

  • (5/28/2012 2:28:00 AM)

    Wonderful and most realistic poem. I like it.
    -Ratnakar Mandlik, Pune(India)
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 27, 2012

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