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A Mathematical Relationship

Rating: 3.9
I now realise the value of time.
In less than a quarter, our distances have been multiplied.
Our communication has been divided.

In the moments to come, I hope to add more special memories,
And subtract the obstacles of our relationship.

May the intensity of our love be inversely proportional to every wave that falls in the Niagara.

May our Love for each other expand into the universe, and
May it be then integrated with the Higher Source
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Chinedu Dike 21 February 2015
Very brilliant, using mathematical variables to quantify and qualify a romantic relationship is poetically very remarkable. It's a lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Akhtar Jawad 19 September 2014
May the intensity of our love be inversely proportional to every wave that falls in the Niagara. If intensity of love varies inversely according to waves, the product of intensity and wave will remain constant, i.e., if the waves will be on lower side the love will be on higher side. If so poet means the waves that affect love and friendship should decrease so that love may increase. A nice idea, i liked it.
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Prasanna Kumari 19 September 2014
love mathematically expressed is well written and beautiful with a universal appeal...
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Kay Staley 19 September 2014
It doesnt really sound like a poem because of 0% rhyme scheme. Just a friendly hint: It would look better if you changed the format on this sight...you dont have to change what you wrote, just hit enter more often and it would look more orderly. The first two paragraphs go along nicely with the name and idea, but the last two arent very good. The references in them are so off the wall and its hard to understand why they are there. If it was longer with more paragraphs like the first two, and had at least a semblance of the rhyme scheme, it would be much better. On the positive side, it is a good idea and has appeal for its unique (mathematical) view.
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Oduro Bright Amoh 19 September 2014
Very very interesting to read. Keep it up
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Roseann Shawiak 26 January 2014
Loved your use of mathematics in this poem. Life revolves around equations and formulas in math, you expressed it well in this poem. I've written several poems using properties of math, if you'd like you may read and comment on them. I'd be interested in your thoughts of them. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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Geetha Jayakumar 19 September 2013
Congratulations Suraj..Beautiful poem on Mathematics..Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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Jayne Davies 19 September 2013
Great poem! Well done!
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Jasbir Chatterjee 20 September 2012
congrats on having this poem chosen as the Poem of the day!
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Jasbir Chatterjee 20 September 2012
Quite an interesting poem, well done...quite well measured, I must say, even the proportions of intensity of love vs waves of Niagara...
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