Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 122,908 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Breaths - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I don’t know it’s love or something else,
But when I don’t see you at least once in a day,
Don’t like to speak, when constrained to speak,
I don’t listen to my words as to what I say,
It’s your sight that is life, like a wave it travels,
Through the eyes to the soul via heart of the clay!
Eyes speak on behalf of my beating heart,
Could you look into eyes, I’m waiting for the day,
When the eyes will meet and will say something,
We’ll see the game, if any, they play,
The lips may smile and the music of speech,
May be felt by the heart and body may say,
Now regret the time in refrains you lost,
How many breaths are left, who can say?

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Ode

Comments about Breaths by Akhtar Jawad

  • Jr Cuyam (12/13/2016 9:18:00 PM)

    love. this must be love (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (9/26/2016 6:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful love poem where the eyes have been entrusted to do the talking in a passionate romantic relationship. But, when it could not sustain the bilateral fire, there is disappointment in the offing. It shows the poet's deep understanding of human behaviour and psychology. Thanks.
    Now regret the time in refrains you lost,
    How many breaths are left, who can say?
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  • Hazel Durham (3/14/2015 9:23:00 AM)

    Original with such passion lit to shine forever with a love so desired with lines rhat have wings to fly to paradise!
    Superb write!
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  • (3/5/2015 9:34:00 AM)

    Wow wow.... Awesome poem really! ! ! 10 on 10..... (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/5/2015 8:44:00 AM)

    Groovy write. Beautifully composed. Many thanks respected sir. ......10 (Report) Reply

  • (3/4/2015 8:56:00 PM)

    Amazing poem...........................10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 4, 2015

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