Bri's Favorite Ice Cream Flavors.... [ Response To Laurie Van Der Hart, On Ph; Humorous; Ice Cream; Short; Fantasy ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri's Favorite Ice Cream Flavors.... [ Response To Laurie Van Der Hart, On Ph; Humorous; Ice Cream; Short; Fantasy ]

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Laurie asked: 'Your favourite is? ',
to which I had to answer: 'Gee whiz,
ARE there flavors, MORE than one?
I eat so fast and, besides, I eat for FUN.

And it's cold and creamy and oh so sweet.
It just curls all ten toes upon my big feet.
If I'd known I had a choice I'd have said:
I'll take ANY flavor, each day till I am dead! '

(August 31st 2017)

Thursday, August 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
in the title i have 'Favorite' because that is how i learned to spell it in these 'United States'. but in the poem body i spell it favourite, as Laurie, an 'African' living in Europe, spells it.

of course HUMANS CAN NOT HAVE UNIVERSAL PEACE AND GOOD WILL! ! ! !
WE CAN'T EVEN SPELL WORDS THE SAME WAY! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

bri :)

THANKS, Laurie, for the challenge/inspiration. it was a quickie to write; i only had time to eat a quart of whatever-flavor-it-was ice cream. : (
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 01 September 2017

Such a question is out of place in the case of Bri....! He is ready to compromise with any flavor if it is ice cream! A Limerick. - Ice Cream Day in and day out he would dream Of cream puffs and ice cream Why wonder who this guy None other than our Bri To have them he would go to any extreme!

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