Though We're Now Apart Poem by Bri Edwards

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Though We're Now Apart

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Though We're Now Apart


It rained, stopped, and rained again....here.
And all that time you were not very near....
to me, but for your presence in my 'heart',
which keeps me with you though we're apart.

This must be, for you, a vacation without my mouth,
while you are up 'North' and I'm here, down 'South'.
And sure it's a vacation for me, your husband, as well,
as for a day or so you will not, face-to-face, at me yell.

But, though I guess I'd survive without you in my life,
....despite our differences, I'd sure miss you as my wife.
We both are stubborn and don't hold back some words,
words which you'd not hear from a pair of 'lovebirds'.

Ok, we are NOT birds, but alas humans, sad but true,
and my 'heart' says 'I love you' and feels you love me too.


September 11th, 2022

Sunday, September 11, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love,marriage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for a 'special person'. bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 12 September 2022

A great poem with touching expression.The last line expresses profoundly how you love your wife and how you miss her even in a few days of separation.

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bri edwards 12 September 2022

Well, Bharati, thanks for comment, ...BUT I don't 'exactly' 'miss her'. I know she is 'missing' and assume she'll be back someday and contact me at least once while gone. (cont.)

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bri edwards 12 September 2022

It is a good break for us I think. I pile dirty dishes in sink, pile dirty clothes in a corner, eat my ice cream and cake...and nothing else! (cont.)

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bri edwards 12 September 2022

BUT I still walk about 100 yards down to mailbox and up the same inclined driveway to return. I just came back and forget what else I planned to say. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 06 October 2024

(cont.) In 2022 my wife had houses in both states (the states share a boundary) . I was probably in SC while she was 'just visiting' her property in NC! ! ! : )

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Bri Edwards 06 October 2024

THAT WAS/IS NOT TRUE. I think the 'North' and 'South' referred to North Carolina and South Carolina. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 06 October 2024

GEE! ! ! I JUST REVIEWED COMMENTS BELOW...AND IT SEEMS AS THOUGH SOME READERS THINK/THOUGHT THAT MY WIFE HAD 'CALLED IT QUITS'/SEPARATED OR DIVORCED. (CONT.)

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 11 January 2024

Truth is, at times, bitter; so also is love. Talking poem

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Anjandev Roy 11 January 2024

Excellent..... remarkable expression...

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Bri Edwards 12 January 2024

THANKS, Anjandev. : ) bri

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