C-harming early sunrise
H-as made you rise up;
A-llowing the sky to get blue,
R-ain has begun to stop.
M-orning has just broken,
A-fter the sweet slumber;
I-t makes your birthday
N-ice and beautiful
E-ver.
Y-our heart is bathed with light,
E-liminating the dark and gray;
T-hird day of December brings brightness along the way.
So, this is a birthday poem! Nice thoughts. Day of birth - Does the noun 'birth' has any day? Day of my birth will make sense. Sorry, I just pointed out this. That is all. Wishing you all the very best on your birthday.
Thanks, Ravi.... for the constructive criticism.... I'll appreciate more in the future.... God bless...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A marvelous birthday acrostic. I love it, Bernard❤️❤️❤️