Brightness Along The Way Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Brightness Along The Way

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C-harming early sunrise
H-as made you rise up;
A-llowing the sky to get blue,
R-ain has begun to stop.
M-orning has just broken,
A-fter the sweet slumber;
I-t makes your birthday
N-ice and beautiful
E-ver.

Y-our heart is bathed with light,
E-liminating the dark and gray;
T-hird day of December brings brightness along the way.

Sunday, December 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Tutaan 31 December 2018

A marvelous birthday acrostic. I love it, Bernard❤️❤️❤️

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Ravi A 04 December 2016

So, this is a birthday poem! Nice thoughts. Day of birth - Does the noun 'birth' has any day? Day of my birth will make sense. Sorry, I just pointed out this. That is all. Wishing you all the very best on your birthday.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 December 2016

Thanks, Ravi.... for the constructive criticism.... I'll appreciate more in the future.... God bless...

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